I am more than a little bit worried.... these two chapters are mostly set-up for later, Luna wont be narrator until chapter 7, the pacing is all funny and worry worry worry. I know if I brought this in front of workshop they'd bring out the switchblades.
Though I guess I shouldnt be surprised that the pacing is funny to me. With Sunset Looms I very clearly and strictly outlined each chapter before I even attempted to start drafting. Here I'm just writing, and letting the events and developments flow out of each character's personality.
And Celestia... she is a teller, that one....
Anyway, the story should be up on EqD in the next couple of days.
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